Sunday, February 7, 2016

Draft of Project 1

    The following is the link to my college essay. The things that I would like you all to pay special attention to are at the bottom of the paper.
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  1. Nick HernandezFebruary 9, 2016 at 9:38 PM

    Here is a link to the rubric where I gave it a grade and and multiple comments for each section. Contact me with any questions or concerns. Nick Hernandez

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  2. UnknownFebruary 9, 2016 at 9:52 PM

    Here
    is the link to the grading rubric. Overall good start and gathering information, just make it a little deeper, specific, and tie your thoughts together in order to make a clear and compelling essay.

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  3. Coby AllredFebruary 12, 2016 at 10:30 PM

    I went through your essay and found that there are a few things that you could improve on, but overall you have a solid start.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/16yguZj4pe1uPnLxFehKjqjKfkKG-UWn0Okq8gaPz9OM/edit?usp=sharing

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  4. UnknownFebruary 12, 2016 at 11:29 PM

    Hello! Here is the rubric I made for your essay. Great start, but add details to make everything more specific. Good job!

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qrFOT7yZ1SL0wMgAoGE5jUrjcSQA5Xemv2npo9KkhoQ/edit?usp=sharing

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