This blog post will contain information
regarding a peer review I preformed for a student in the same section. I will
analyze ways that I helped them, and something that I admired about their work.
1.
I
peer reviewed Jason Boley’s Content
Outline.
2.
I
decided to make an outlining suggestion for this peer review. I gave Jason
feedback on the level of detail and development of his outline.
3.
I
helped make Jason’s work better by making suggestions as to how he could
develop his outline. For instance, I suggested creating an attention grabber that
would actually appeal to the audience. I suggested trying to establish ethos by
possible describing a personal story that is both relevant and interesting.
This will help grab the reader’s attention. I also recommended developing his
outline a little more. He should describe what he will be in each segment of
the video when he is constructing the outline. This will make it easier to
create a rough draft.
4.
When
I was suggesting that Jason establish his credibility, I was incorporating “Consider
Your Character and Credibility” from page 228 of the Student’s Guide. I talked about creating ethos in order to present
himself as a credible person. This would, in return, create an attention
grabber. This is because the audience members enjoy it when they can relate to
what they are saying (hence the personal story).
5.
One thing
that I really admired about Jason’s work is how well his outline flowed. Each
topic seemed to be somewhat related to the other, which created a nice
transition between each topic. This will make it much easier for a rough draft
to be constructed.
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