This
is going to be an open and honest post to my peer viewers. It will discuss much
of what I want them to know and realize about my project. I will also discuss
the strengths and weaknesses of it.
1. As you may know, this is a rough draft.
And when I say rough draft, I mean rough.
With that being said, please ignore the pauses and random phrases inserted in
to the podcast. These will be taken out during the editing process. I would
like you to focus on the description of my conventions for each genre. For
instance, are they specific enough? To they clearly distinguish the three
genres presented? If not, how can I improve upon that?
I would also
like you to focus on the implication of my evidence in to my paper. Is it
enough to simply state the title and to not describe my paper at all?
2. I have a few major weaknesses. For one, I
cannot seem to formulate my sentences. I realize that and I have already had
multiple recordings for each section in an attempt to fix this. Two, it is hard
for me to come up with content when I’m put in the spot. When I say this, I
mean that the topics that I discuss may not be very in depth at all. In fact,
they may be general and totally off-topic. With that being said, please lookout
for content that is not on topic/too general.
The last is the repetition of phrases and
words. I am not just repeating myself in order to make my sentences come out
clear, but I repeat myself because I am not always sure that I made my point
clear. Please inform me of which sections require more in depth explanation and
which provide adequate discussions.
3. There are really only a few strengths in
my “rough cut”. For one, I follow the conventions of a podcast fairly well. I
begin with an introduction of the podcast segment and myself. I use colloquial language
and a conversational tone in an attempt to relate to the audience. I also
include an audio segment from another interview and close by thanking all of
the subjects. Please let me know if any of this is unclear as you are listening
to the podcast.
I also believe that I do a pretty good
job at explaining the purpose and audience of each genre. Please inform me if
you believe this to be untrue.
My Peer Review for your Podcast:
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-Joshua Smith
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